Using your Pre-Assignment, review it using the Revision Checklist and identify at least three elements that could be added to make the document better.
Revision Checklist
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Check the facts. |
Are the facts correct? |
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Are there any assumptions? |
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Check the length. |
Does it tell readers more than they want to know? |
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Does it miss important evidence? |
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Check the structure. |
Does it have a beginning that makes it clear what the report is about? |
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Does the middle develop and support the main idea? |
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Does the ending summarize, reinforce the point, and make recommendations? |
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Is each paragraph unified and coherent? |
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Does each paragraph relate to the main thesis? |
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Does each paragraph relate to the paragraph before and after it? |
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Check the style. |
Be on the lookout for lengthy, obscure sentences; wordiness; pretentiousness; overuse of the passive voice; and imprecise language. |
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Read the report out loud and circle parts where you get bored. |
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Cut, rearrange, and rewrite. |
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Check for errors. |
Check spelling and grammar. |
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Check punctuation. |
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Check the requirements. |
All mandatory requirements are included. |
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